Hey, I can really relate to this one, has a rhythm, just one thing on...'To many decisions' should be 'Too', sorry for being picky, well great poem, take care xxx

This is a great poem.. I can really relate to it.. It's great.. Keep the work up!

I love this poem and I can really relate to what your saying.

P.S. Thanks for the heads up on that tyler person. He should learn form you how to write great poems on his own.

hey i just have to say i love this poem. its beautiful. i mean wow

Hey great poem! I loved it! I give you a definate five!
Keep writing cause you got a hell of alot of talent!
Take care,
Rachelxx

Thanks for commenting on my work too, it means alot :)