that was awesome! a poem doesn't have to have rhyme to be great unlike everyone thinks. Most of my stuff rhymes but thats just my way of writing and everyone has their own way. great poems; not just this one!(i've read most of your poems) LoVeS & PeAcEz
crystal

It was interesting to read. It's always nice to read something different every once in a while. Nicely done and keep it up mate! :)
-A

great poem, it was cool...but i had to read it like 3 times be4 i got it lol, but then it might be becuz i'm kinda slow...i liked ur poem tho, its so....unique...lol...it was great i agve you a 5, check out sum of writing, kinda bad but stil...lol
â–‘Christinaâ–‘

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nice

Aken Sol

i loved it. it was so..capturing..i started reading it and i couldnt stop ive read it like 20 times i just love it
with luv
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