hey serena ya poem is great um....just say what you feel it doesnt have to rhyme just do youre best hopefully it will come out wonderful.
best love-jay

i love this poem! really it's great! i can relate! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

thanx for the comments guys!!

Serenia

i watch as the blood drips onto the floor
since no one loves anymore
all i wanted in life is for someone to adore
now i shall suffer forevermore

thats something i suggest but put it in you words or something, i like this one, i dont think i can get better well great poem again lol, late. <5>