wow, that was really good. i feel the same way except i see HIM with another GIRL. well keep up the good work i love reading your poems

This is my new favorite poem. Im not kidding! This is exactly what Im going through except with my ex boyfriend. This was an excellent write and I can tell that it comes from your heart. Your feelings are very well felt.... lol! Good job.
SHEEST

~ nice description of your feelings, excellent poem!
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

a very good poem indeed......take care!!!

Sounds like this girl really got to your heart..... I know how that feels, and it hurts like hell. But at least you know she isn't for you. It's difficult, but be patient, and you'll find another to love. Someone who deserves you. Try not to scrutinize it in your mind, and when you least expect it, love will surprise you in ways you never thought were possible.........

Really good poem, and thanks so much for the comment on mine. Meant a lot. Best wishes! ~dandy~