OMG its beautiful. so sad, yet so amazing. great write!
Fighter
-xXx-

hiya babes
still can't believe this poem, its a shame that shit like that happens all the time thou
keep up the gd work

Also a very sad poem! It's a nice story incide of the poem, emphasized by the right words, well done...

I just loved this poem. it's amazing

very good... also sad... keep writing.
love,
~Katie~

OMg..Luved it well done keep it Up XOxxox Stephy :)

You've got a nice story behind it but I think you could have made it rhym a little better. But over all it was pretty good. Nice work. >3jess