well it is short ... really short and i am not trying to be rude in this comment but also the line that says

My heart is empty
filled with sadness

doesn't make sense to me since it is empty then filled i dunno sorry but i didn't really like this poem maybe cause it was to short and there just wasn't enough make it good ... it's so small thats it's almost a quote ... i didn't rate cause i would have rated it a 3 and i don't want to ruin your average ... but tell you friend to write longer and most importantly keep writing ... sorry if this comment offends you ... but it's just my own opinon

this is good for what its worth...sherrie...