Wow...this poem made me have tears in my eyes. It's so depressing, yet so beautiful. I love it. I love the repetition of what will not, cannot do. It's just...great.
Keep up the good work,

xoxZoexox

hi people! this poem:i am completely over that guy now. mostly. but whatever, love's like that....please comment on it even if ur telling me it sucks! comments r great :D

This poem is sooooo real, i think everyone feels like that at some point and if they don't they're lucky !!!!
XxX Charli XxX ~*~

Hi, I reader your comment on my poem again and i came down to look at your other poems, then I found this one. It is so good, I could relate so much to it still i was running back to him and he would never understand why I was mad. But 2 weeks ago he just left without saying anything.. I've lost already so many people that I loved And now this happen, I don't trust anymore because of him.. I Don't know if it still on or if he still loves me Or that i should just wait or that I should move on.. Anyway I'm sorry :$ I just gotta let it out I loved your poem and a it deserves much more then a 5 but that is the highest I can give you. I added you to my favorites, and please read my latest poem :$ Keep it up.