great poem! i love it! i can relate! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

Hey, this is amazing!! i'm sorri that your life is sucky rite now....but plz dont do that...u deserve a lot...and ur sibling and parentz need u!! your a great writer, i can relate to sum of this..and im alwayz here if ya wanna talk...keep it up and take care...best of wishes go out to u..
~Luv ALwayz Knoxy

really really deep i like it alot

Wow! Awesome!! Your a good writter and when I read your poems I feel your pain and I go through the same thing with my mom and step dad and my mom and dad and such. Well hope things get better!

much love
savannah

thanx everyone for commenting i wrote this poem first actually as my suicide letter so i didnt mean for it to b poetic at all jsut turned out to be so for advice to other poets jsut write form ur heart and it turns out beautiful