Very powerfully done. I loved how it starts off as a seemingly innocent poem then it jsut hits you with the words 'supression' 'fascist' Really nicely done. Thanks for the comments on mine. :)
-A

beautifully written...all your poems are so deep and powerful....take care and keep writing...FIVE>>>

Excellent job!!! :) I loved it so much. Keep it up and take care!

God bless you! ;)

5 * as usual

Your writings aren't like any other I have ever read. You are amazing! Keep it up and take care!

Beautifully phrased. Very touching. Not what I was expecting after reading the title, but then again, I'm not really sure what I was expecting exactly.
Wonderful write none the less.
Take care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

That was an extremely enjoyable poem... a wonderful read.. the phrasing and words were beautiful and still has a lovely, wistful hue of emotion within it..

one thing, though.. I didn't really like "creed of greed"... it made it sound a bit... cheesy? .. maybe a bit.. off?.. well.. ignore that, if you wish.. but I won't let it refrain me from voting a 5.

Excellent poem, sorry I haven't had the chance to read much, I'll get back when I can... Take care, good job!

that was awsome!!!

awesome man. i liked the words you used. im back on here now and im gonna read some more of your stuff now. catcha later! -Luke 5/5