A well written poem, with a lot of feeling put into it. It shows that you don't need to rhyme to get a message across. Nice work! If you have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx!

hey hunni this poem is wicked cute... this is what i feel about my X but he lied and cheated too much for me to handle.. email me sometyme we will talk and if u have aim my sn is megaflirtx --- email---- angelbabe5487@yahoo.com

Thanks guys My SN is John I tell I am alomost always ion if u need someone to talk to

hey this is pretty cool.... i feel this waytoday cause my ex said that he dont want a gf right now but i'll probably seehim with another girltomorrow.. i really loved him but now every time i see him it's like y cant it be.... o well :-(.....

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good stuffs!

hey that was good

So I am guessing this poem is dedicated to a girl you love. This poem was really sweet and sad. Your a very talented poet and I look forward to reading more of your poems. Keep writing !
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