hmmmh....it must be pretty confusing to live in "two worlds" at the same time. But i liked the way you put it, and i especially like the last line about "sinning in both worlds."
Keep on writing~
~Sonja~

I know exaclti wat u mean cept mines different mines 1 world wid mi m8s n 1 wid mi family n i no wat u mean in all ur poem its brill i luv it!
Keep on writin luv Becky x