JESSIE! this was an AWESOME poem! really its great! you have sooo much talent! great job!

your one and only valentine
xX-Katherine-Xx

I liked the rhythm. You're not bad at all! Don't get so down on yourself, and keep writing!

"Blood drips down her lips
As a sign of tainted love"
why is there blood dripping down her lips? I like the poem....just, confusing, I guess.