Comments : Hide and Seek

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    This is such a good poem! I love the lines...
    'What you are saying
    Drills into my mind
    Over, and over
    Repeatedly

    Banging my head
    Against the wall
    Over, and over
    Repeatedly'

    I love the repeatition, wonderful work, keep it up! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    i like it, good job. keep it up. its rather inspirational i think, if i get it right and its about moving on.,,, well keep writing.

  • Yep, you're right Logan. Thank you Violet! I really appreciate these comments.