aww thats really good i am in the same problem right now so just keep tryin maybe it will work out 4 ya i hope it does!!!

hey that was really nice. The words explain how u really feel. Great work!!!=) Can u plz check out mine some time I will really appreiate it thanks!!!=)

wow a very strong and emotional poem congrats it has been a long time since I have read a poem like this WOW its really touching Im still always amazed seriously so PLEASE keep on writing 'cause I want to read more of your poems!!!!And congrats for the poem it's PERFECT
5/5 *Alex*

Wow, hey I love this poem!! It has a lot of meaning and it's so true, good work!! Excellent!

wow this is great! i'm going through the same thing right now. well anyways great job! xoxo

a big wow..i lloved ur poem..its just really great,and it feels so true for everyone who loses someone like that ! am gonna tell u,if that was true,then u have to go n say ur sorry,coz if he is as u said ! then he worths that! ok ? : ) good luck,n tell us later ok ? a note:being n admitting about a mistake is the bravest thing in the world ! so go on.

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peace,Darla

This is a VERY good poem.. It sounds like something similar to what I am going through with a guy friend that I used to have. I deffinetly give it a 5/5! Keep up the good work, you are very talented!
**Love Always**
~mags~

rock on dude!! tat peom rocks 5/5 kick ass

Wow......Im speechless........that was amazing! One of the best poems Ive read for a long time. Keep up the great work!
Take care,
Rachelxx

you are very talented

Very good...-Always and Forever~Alicia~