That was really nice and it really shows how ones really feels. Can u plz check out my poems sometimes I will really appreciate it. Thanks!!!=)

This is a realy good poem, I have felt like this before all I can say is it does get better!

That's pretty good! Keep it up!
Much love,
Angel

good i wish people would vote for my poems well anyway really good keep up the good work :)

Lot of emotion. Great job! Keep it up! Take care!
-Conner