Beautiful, descript, and vivid! And the name is very attractive as welTo say it was enjoyable after reading it twise would be an injustice Miles.
This piece of yours was everything.

Dude this si good stuff here great jobs

wow great poem!! i had to look sum of the words ,,,but you used them we!! rate and comment on sum of my poems sum x tanks

This was a GREAT poem. Thank you so much for all the comments. I appreaciated them so much. XX

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

I read this and realise I have a long way to go. Inspirational stuff, Miles.

Bert

That was... magnificent, no, that isn't a powerful enough word. I'm speechless. Excellent poem, one my favorites. Take care...

Wow, that was such a great poem. You defidently sound like a more mature writer. I love this piece. >3jess

The language you use here is amazing and it completely captured me. I loved the last stanza where you refer to yourself as a heretic tourist. As if you are a foreigner looking into a worped world. Excellent!

The images and intense descriptions in this were amazing. You explained things clearly but also in so much detail. Good job!

This poem made me think about what's waiting me tomorrow, and tomorrow, and tomorrow...and so on ^^
i'm speechless this is too damn good, excelent, awsome, beautiful, descriptive, "alive", deep, powerfull..damn i dunno what to say either than that cuz i'm still amazed =)

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