I like this poem its really good it sounds like soemthing you would see in the movies i love it and you never know mabe one day Luke might call out of nowhere or mabe hell write you god does misterious things so youll never kno what might happened with you and Luke but i liked this poem keep writing love alwyas-nat

Hey, this is amazing!!! really descriptive..keep on writing and take care...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

an emotional story definatly! It was like I was there. Magnificantly portraied and it didn't matter if it didn't rhyme because I barely noticed it. Great Job!

reminds me of my first kiss. i was shocked when i got it. it was soo unexpected. we were the best of frinds. btu that day seemed dif. and i have no regrets at all. thanx 4 bringing me wonderful memories.. 5/5 4 sure.