wow i really like this poem it's really good and keep up the good work maybe one day you could be famous:p
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Takecare

I love it. Your horrific imageries at the beginning,
"Ripping out my tongue and bleeding from my throat
Holding back the words inside to swallow them and choke"
created a dark and poignant atmosphere which made the piece all the more beautiful. I love how you portrayed the strive to mask sadness and pain while creating graphic symbols embedding the mind with frighteningly beautiful images. Beautiful job, excellent

i really like your style, it is very honest and harshly real.

I liked this...it kept me intrigued! The vivid imagery is captivating! Great job~Holly

I love your word choice. It has such a cool way to this poem.