Awsome! I loved it! It flowed very nicely. kinda forced a couple words, but it's still great.

This was phenomenal. You shouldnt sell yourself short mate, you're a really good poet. This poem is good anyway.
xox
-A

I love.Very well written. I like the last line.
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~~(~~Morana~~)~~

Man... this is deep... i love it!
i especially love this part...

"...Everyone looks, but never once
Have they seen what they didn't wish to see
Ignored by many and shunned by all
A loner I am condemned to be

So I recede back into the world
That my imagination has made
Where I am special, one of a kind
An existence that I will not trade..."

i've said this before, but your poems are awesome. you're seriously my favorite poet on P&Q.
great job.

La Boricua