Loved it!...Good one!

Chris

Wow that was really really good.... i think that might just be the best one you have written to date... great job..
Aaron

Powerful poem that produces a powerful message. Well done. lol

Good poem Heather it was rather incitetive. I know that it is sometimes hard to bare your soul for the world to see but i know that it is a lot easier on the internet or in a poem.

I was in no way offended by your comment either, i appreciate your honesty and in the manner you did it not like "you suck dark" or "Poem was really bad" it was "i liked this one less then the others" it means you liked the others and thought i could have did better with it.....which i did have that idea in my head but i wanted to end on the seer line.

Good poem, unfortunate subject you had to expeirence to write about.

Five/Five

P.S. I love all the feedback i get, good or bad i remember it.