that was very interesting...Good! Very good! Keep it up!
Love Always,
Angel

I liked this poem, very interesting, neat pattern. Great job, 5!

A very original piece. Nicely written, and 'deep' for want of a better word. Kudos.

i loved it..very orginal! a five!

I love that you have written a poem not just to the reader, but about the reader. Very creative and very good, keep going!

very very very good..5/5 i liked it alot..

much love
shannon