Comments : I MISS YOU

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    this was very sad. Its a good thing to get these feelings out. It's great to write it all down and get it out of your mind so you dont dwell on it too much. But looking at it and the poem style, It would have been easier to read if it was in stanzas and if you organized it nicely and put in descriptive details. just thoughts, maybe for next time. Stay strong, and keep your uncle alive through your poems and you life.

    Take Care,
    Renee