awesome write...i hope you're okay...ilove you...i need you...i love you xx

-Mort
xxTakeCarexx

awsum ur a brilliant writer i pictured it all great use a vocab too! loved it 5/5!

Hello Logan.
I really enjoy reading your poems
They are really good
and I relate to them
take a look at some of mine if you have time take care

Good poem! its kewlio! lol could u check out some of my poems if u have the time??? kk thanks!
*Kat*

Hey beautiful poem.

I loved it.

the only thing i would change would be the police warrents part it seems like you are forcing the rhyme there. But otherwise this is one of my favorites of yours awesome job!!!

hang in there
**~~**
cate

Another one about rain. I think when you are going to publish your poems in a book, once in the future, you should make an own chapter named "rain poems"...:) I really like it, just like I like the rain:)

Excellent rhymes and flow!
A real pleasure to read due to good imagery and nice wording.
Good work!
5/5