It wasn't bad. i saw a word or two that was used incorrectly, but none the less it was good.

-Church

awww i like your poem and hey u got the same name as me...i got some poems 2 so u should read some of mine...You would like them 2..But i'm in the same boat with my bf so thanx 4 writing this..

i think you did really good on expressing your feelings in this poem...right now i currently think my bf is cheatin but i wont say anything...lol but i do like your poem

hey, if he cheated once he is going to cheat agian! trust me, i thought my bf would not cheat ever agian and he did it three times! Once a cheater always a cheater! u should of broke up with him, seriuously, ur way better than that! I amnot trying to be rude or mean, i just hate when i got cheated, and if any was in the same boat i would tell them to get out before u get too hurt~ Sorry if I said sumthing u didn't like! Best of luck!

Lys