thats a really good poem. i loved this part

I'm frozen
With guilt
at what I did
At what I've become

woo awesome! good job

hey ! i really enjoyed ur poem it had a awesoem feel to it.im going to check out more of your stuff. good job =)

this is really different but i like how you wrote it.

~thanks for the comments lil slam~

Hey, good stuff, very interesting! Keep it up! luv kt

Interesting write. With the subject being regret, or whatever, lol, it's relatable to a lot of people, but if you didn't tell that at the end, it could have seemed to have multiple meanings. I liked it. Nice work David.:)

this was good, 5/5.it left me hanging, i liked it.
thanx for your comments!!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

that was wonderful 5/5 keep it up. you have got talents.

this poem has a very unique style...i like it...nice job...luv yas mwah

-kayla-