beautiful poem, some good use of rhymes there! keep writing :) God bless you!

take care, 5! always believe in love

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♥ amit ♥

this was a great poem, your really talented, take care, and you dont need to revise it, its perfect the way it is!

you write awesome poetry. i love it! keep writing, you're really good.

Awesome poem! loved it! no need to revise honestly its good the way it is! i agree! keep up the good work! 5/5!

i think it's good as is.
great job.

Great poem! I loved it!
If ya wanna check out some of my poems and tell me whatcha think...
Keep up the good work & I look forward to reading more of your stuff!

God bless
Rebecca.