umm it was ok i think it could have been improved a little better but it was pretty good keep trying!
~rock on~

yah i agree with u its not one of my better! but u no! no one writes everything perfectly! :) ill check ur stuff out thanx for the comment!

Hey

I liked it alot, I have read alot of your other stuff too and I like your style.

You write with so much honest and raw emotion.

Thank your for you kind comment, check out my new poem "My Monster" if you get chance. Look forward to reading more for you!!

Kind regards
Hayley

With Satan as your guide, the road is dark
With angels as your guide, the road is bright
With friends by your side, you are you're own guide.