hey this is really good!!!!!!!
i just ended a long term relationship and it was something that was really hard for me to let go of... its not easy letting go of the one you love. and it hurts really bad when i just sit there in my room and think about the good times i spent with this guy!!!!
i thought that your poem was great!!

hey this is really good!!!!!!!
i just ended a long term relationship and it was something that was really hard for me to let go of... its not easy letting go of the one you love. and it hurts really bad when i just sit there in my room and think about the good times i spent with this guy!!!!
i thought that your poem was great!!

this poem is really good..I loved it...

Unloved ♥

Your actual idea behind this is very clever but the lines are too long. I've read better, but this is still a lvoely, thougtful poem. Well done.
Take care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

Thanks to everyone who voted and commented...it really means a lot to me...because this is probably the best poem I've ever wrote! Thanks and keep voting and commenting!

I loved it!! this is the best one i have read yet!! it has so much passion and love and hate and fear and it has all the feelings that i am feeling. it's beatiful!!!