Heather, A very beautiful passionate love poem. Always open your heart through your writings, it sure eases some of the pain. lol

Good, but I think the length of the lines while reading them needs a little more consistency. Good theme though!

ALWAYS ONE THAT LEAVES BAD VIBES AROUND,WELL I THINK IT WAS GREAT DAVID WHO REALLY GIVES A MONKEY`S FLYING FLICK ABOUT LINES ETC ETC EVERYONE HAS THERE OWN WAYS 5 /5