good creative work, nobia sis! though i told you b4 also, i dont believe in suicides. this is a good story, much like my inspirational poem 'story of a girl'. this one's also a masterpiece like the first one, i like your work! :) keep writing, looking forward to read a poem based on love story with happy ending from you!

take care, 5! always believe in love

♥ amit ♥

I read the first one, and this one, its really sad! :( Well done.. a 5 from me..