This poem is so sad. I can really relate to this poem, i know what it's like. If this poem is explaining a life experience that you've had or have, then i am truly sorry, it is touch, but hang in there. If you need someone to talk to, my email is at the bottom ok. But I really like your poem, i like rythem you gave it. The way you used irony by refering to a fairytale and the fairytale land really has a great effect on it. Keep writing!
Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)
P.S my email is: evil_yet_lovable@hotmail.com (its stupid, i know lol).

That was wonderfully written, I understood every word of it. very emotional. Great job, keep it up!

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I liked this one too. You are talented. Keep up the good work.

Great poem, you must've had large amounts of inspiration. It flows nice, rhymes nice, and leaves an impact. Keep up the great work.

Exellent job on this poem a sad one but u were able to write it so well. Check out some of mine if u would Thanx!

this is really ne of the best ones i've read her nice work

Wow really really nice poem. i love all your poems. You are such a great writer. Look foward to reading so more of you poems. See Ya!