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Aken Sol

Okay, after much pondering, I think i finally figured it out. Good job Sean :-)

Aken Sol

BTW, i had this dream too. Quite terrifying isn't it?

For some reason this poem reminds me partly of the movie Real Genius with Val Kilmer's character talking about being in "sun god robes" surrounded by beautiful women throwing pickles at him....

This "dream", though, had a bit more to contemplate in the end. Regardless, terribly interesting poem.

I liked the 5th stanza heaps. The poem kinda reminded me of being in a bad dream and then suddenly being in feilds of chocolate. o.O

But, What are "Lilliputians" I don't know what they are. But I thought the poem was pretty good! *nods* yup. I did! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.