Comments : I'm Trying

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    beautiful poem, heartfelt! and some very veryy good use of rhyme!

    take care, 5! always believe in love

    dont forget to vote for my poem 50 reasons why i love you!

    ♥ amit ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Tim, A beautiful poem. Sometimes we can try to hard. I guess as long as we try our hearts can be satisfied. Enjoyed, great job. lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Aww awesome work Hun:) Keep it up!

    Jenn x0x0x