I liked this... gave it 5... keep writing...

Fantastic poem, i absolutely loved it!!!!!! Brilliant brilliant! So sad though...i know things aren't great for you at all at the moment, i just hope they get better real soon.

Thankyou SO much for your comment, it really made me smile, id like to keep in touch, if u want to too. I'm here if you need me, you can send me a private message ANY TIME and i mean that!! xxxxxxxxx Toni

Auu. Wonderful poem. Sad and emotional, great write. I hope you are going to be okay hun. Well done!

;;--Kalah

oh sweetie im crying now! xxxxxxxxxxxxx amazing poem xxxx