very touching poem; i love it

Nice poem, I don't like rain, makes peoples hair messy....

great poem. keep it up.

Yea, well i dont know him personally, but we went to the same school, and the whole thing was sad.

Thanks

good poem. its very original, especially the style. i enjoyed reading it alot

wow you can really write your poem is so good 5/5

Nice. i particularly liked:
"Just don't wake me in the morning
Because I'll still be soaking in the pain"
Effective use of language, and short and sweet. nice job.