very well written, and sad, i liked the lines 8-12. keep writing

take care, 5! always believe in love

♥ amit ♥

Good flow to it, if life seems really unfair to you at the moment, I hope things get better, stay strong, keep it up xxx

gr8t job! Check out some of mine please :)

Wow,your poem is really beautiful and so touching. It is that same thing I feel towards my self.