great...5/5

That was really good... i like how you played a story throughout the poem... i love it... it just shows you that there is always hope out there... 5/5

Wow awesome
one suggestion tho..try spacing it out a litle bui...and it'll be tons ewaier to rad.@ anyway awesome work keep writing
see if u can comment on my poems

I like this, i mean it was REALLY REALLY REALLY good, even though the girl doesn't deserve him

I love it... it has so much thought and feelings into it!

Emily

This is truly amazing i mean the way you wrote it. i kind of have this kind of anger right now. but i have no way of taking it out.

That was amazing! I love the way you made us feel what the soldier was feeling. Keep it up I will be looking for more of your work