i like this, its really good

I liked it

Wow that is some powerful shit man i love it and it touch my heart...no not my heart my soul i love it. keep writing never stop great job man

Thats a great poem and btw this has nothing to do with it but my bf's name is Peter

Good job with this poem... I like the way it ended... just abruptly, you know like death does somethimes... Anyway, good job, 5/5