the rhyming got sorta messed up in the end, cuz i had been working on this poem for so long, but i hope somebody likes it cuz it took so long to write and i can't really do much better! yeah w/e but plz just comment and tell me if ya like it and if you don't tell me why and it'll help alot. thanx!

Good poem! Read some of mine if u want. Thanx

Javisst är det.. Har inte sett så många svenskar på denna sida faktiskt.. Hur är det med dig då? Hittat på något kul i helgen..? Bor du i sverige eller i finland.. Ha det bra!
*Väldigt bra dikt du har skrivit, 5/5 till dig* =)

you write really good poetry and enjoy reading your work, keep it up!
<3 always, sarah

I liked the message of this poem, I think that it would flow better if you put the lines into stanzas. Keep writing!

another great poem, you really have talent!! 5/5....but I agree it flows perfectly until the last 3 lines...then it like breaks apart a little, but I still loved it!!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Very well written, Sonja. I read the other comments, and I'm wondering if you've changed that last stanza, because I think it sounds great!

This is a great expression of faith! God will surely use it to his glory.

Is there a famous poem called Footprints in the Sand? I didn't know that, and i've never read it.

This is also nice, well written

beautiful! i enjoyed this!

beautiful! i enjoyed this!

this poem is really great. keep it up dorotea. take care, Marjan