Awesome job hun...so sad :( I hope all is well with you...keep writing please, and living...xxx <33 xxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Wow! What a sad poem! The last lines were really sad and was an excellent way to close the poem! I really like this! Excellent job!! 5 outta 5! :o)
Shannon

That was rally something what a sad poem. Goodbyes are easy to said than done =( Still great poem!!! Could you checl my new poem My Story thanks!!!=)

I don't really have anything to critizize! it was a beautiful poem. I liked the way you changed the rhyme scheme though most people wouldn't. It was an awesome poem and it touched me. keep it up ben!

vedali

Oh what a wonderful poem! Very descriptive I loved it!! Great Job your a very unique writer!
ALways a fan,
~Chelsey~

Wow what a heartfelt piece made me cry always amazing 5

Very nice poem. I really liked it, it was so sad... Great job on it though, keep writing!

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wow, this was nice! 5/5!

this is So good...very heartfelt. Keep it up youre very talented! thanks for the comments on mine...its appreciated. Good day to you!

She died?

Thats a beautiful poem...Well written. I really liked it! Great work!
Love Julie
XOXOX

Aww this is sad but an awesome poem ben!! Keep it up k.
Love SNTR.