AWESOME!i love the way uve put it
i can feel the anger from within.really cool.i look forward to reading more of ur stuff
AWESOME!

This is a brilliant piece. The wording is so unique...magnificently written! Holly

Great job, Paul. I could feel the anger coming from within. Well written. Take Care lol

Very unique. Very intriguiging too. Not quite sure how to spell that, but yeah :T
Again, lovely poem. Think I'll put you on my favourites. Your work is amazing.
Take care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

i love this poem...great job 5 out of 5