Comments : You see me..

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    GREAT METAPHORE! finally someone who uses metaphores. I like how you used the different parts of dieing to show that your depressed.

    That Metaphore was one of the best i have read hun. definately one of your best, you should put it on your featured list, i think it is an awesome poem. I loved every word of it.

    Five/Five wicked poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    good and sad!

    ~lil slam~ thanks for the comment~