Not your best work. I liked the poem though, it sounds like you might be suffering from depression hun.
Your a really good poet and i have added you to my favorites, i am glad that you commented on my poems. I enjoy every vote and every comment that i get.

Keep up the good work,

Signed,
Shaun

P.S. i added you to my favorites, i will look forward to more of your things and VERY NICE STRUCTURE!