As you tell your story, this story in your head...and I yet imagine what might have inspired you so...
The beauty of this series, and the workings you have weaved between your stanzas...between each description, it's simply magical Miles.

this is an amzing poem and i think its aweosome, gr8 work .. !!

Thank you, Bob! Very great compliment. :)

And as to the collection, I'm not sure how many more... I _think_ one more, but we'll see what happens. Regardless, I'll post anything new separately, as well as a final post with everything all in one when I'm completely done (however long that takes!). ;)

I'll definitely will check into him! Thanks for the recommendation. I absolutely love tales delivered through poesy... it's so bardic! :)

I really liked that this scene contributed to the war that is taking place through out the story and sheds light on the main plot and what these malicous events are occuring for. Also, you were able to explain these details with an artful skill that adds a darkened and beautiful atmosphere to the storyline which created a wonderful outlook to the main plot.
(I did see the "power-dower" rhyming again but I'm still not sure what your doing with that)
Alright, one more to go*
Well done

Excellent, as usual, I agree with Bob Shank, and I like the idea of them all posted together at the end. Take care, on too part 5