Good portrayal of the devil. I liked that you portayed the devil that is within each and every one of us.

It is a good poem and i enjoyed it a lot. Your a wonderful poet and there is a deeper meaning in this poem, perhaps i have missed construed within it.

All in all,
Great Poem.

Five/Five

good poem, a couple spelling mistakes but overal it was great, it flowed nicely and I loved the theme.

First of all, I want to thank you for commenting on my poem "Personal". It means so much to me, you have no idea.
But now for the poem. I love it. I love how you talk about the devil, and even though I'm not a believer, you really sucked me into this poem.
May I make a suggestion? When you say "They ain't" maybe you should change it to "They're not". I just feel it makes the poem flow more easily.
Anyway, keep up the good work!
xoxZoexox

Another great poem ur choice in words really make this poem. I agree with changing the word "aint" and maybe run a spell check but other than that this poems tells a great story! I really like ur poems! Keep writing! Brooke

Firstly I'd like to thank you all for commenting it really means so much! Thank you especially to Daniel, Zoe and Brooke for your suggestions, i really appreciate it for it allows me to grow as a poet, so ThAnK yOu!!!
I did a spell check and i agree with the suggestion made by Zoe and Brooke and I did change it, I put a * next to the line where i did so that people can see that it wasn't MY idea and rather a suggestion!!!
Once again Thank you all!!!
Love
Tash
xoxox

very good.. I loved this one.. I voted a 5 =) please check out some of my poems.. thank a lot.. hugs

loved loved loved loved it! you have such a beautiful imagination and you know how to put htem on paper!! hahha you have a wonderful gift!!

Super work, this poem is very well written and thought out.

Well, I like it just as much as the first time:P