Comments : Why


  • Yes it may be lost
    And wont come back again
    But don’t let losing something like that
    Drive you insane

    Instead remember these things
    I am about to say
    Remember I love you
    More each day

    I love your smile
    Your tender kiss
    When I’m with you
    All I feel is bliss

    So Don’t show fury
    Don’t let a flame grow
    Just remember I love you
    Because I hope you know

  • 15 years ago

    by shannon

    another awesome poem. keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by Broken Hearted Immortal

    seems as if you almost have a 5.0 on all your poems i am impressed only if i were that good. keep up the good work.

    ~Xiaoyu~

  • 15 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Wonderful:) you made it:) my heart is on fire:)

  • 15 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    That was full of true emotion! I like that! I don't see where ur poems need any advice u are doing really well! Check out my newest one if u would please! Thanx! Brooke

  • 14 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    AWsome you MAde this poem with so much deep emotion it was great
    ~HazE