Comments : Tonight I'm taking my life

  • 19 years ago

    by jess

    this poem really hits the emotions it made tears well in my eyes its brilliant i hope your not suicidal if you need a friend i'm here take care and chack out my poems if you get the chance lov jess:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Essence of Blight

    I love your poem! This 1's really good! I LOVE your rhymin too! You got talent indeed! Keep it up! Arrivederci!

  • 19 years ago

    by Emma Garcia

    hi, my name is emma garcia- i just wanted to tell you that if you are really suicidal, dont do it! if you ever need someone to talk to my e-mail iz
    fairy_lover_05@yahoo.com
    lots of love-Emma Garcia

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    omgsh..that was very very sad i loved it alot..you are extremely talented

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    wow very good but I hope it isn't something u really feel. U have talent girl keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Wow that was great! I loved it! It was such a powerful poem. I particularly liked the last verse, but if you are thinking about commiting suicide then please please dont do it. You have to much to live for.
    Take care,
    Rachelxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Alicia

    Wow.. your peoms are amazing I hope this really isn't true that you don't feel that way.-Always and Forever~Alicia~

  • 15 years ago

    by Mary

    Great poem AGAIN
    :)