by Dark Savior
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I know men are not suppose to cry...but this is so close to an ex-girlfriend of mine...and she was molested as a kid and it took me a close to five months of hounding her ot get her to come forth with it...it really hit home for me. |
by HOLLY ARMER
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I know this really happens, but it is just horrifying! You captured the emotion's very well! Great job~Holly |
by Scaleeski
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Good Job..Very..I dunno..Heart wrenching..Haha.. |
by christina
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wow thats an amazin poem hunzz i loved it ........... it was sooo touchin alot off these stuff happenes in this wrold i love ur poems hunzz keep it upp great job :D >:D<:'( |
by lindsey
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Its nicely written. It make you tense to read it, Knowing that it happens to some kids. |
by Ann Stareyes
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Heather, this goes on this world so much. Why do grown men target children when there are so many willing women in the world? They are pervert's, and very sick. I wish I had the authority to punish these sick fools. Nicely written and a great job. lol |
by Bizarre
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i love that poem. i've never read anything like it before. thank god it never happened to you right? |
by miaowmolly
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I must say this struck sumthing inside me. Your wrote it so well you'd actually think u were molested as a child. Great work i hope to see more of your work. 5/5 Peace and love mia XxX |
by Brittany
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very good poem.i hate guys like that..my sister real dad did that to her, and her brother who has downsyndrome.he was 4 and she was 1. |
by Child of God
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Aww, i uh...That was very sad, it's kind of a touchy subject for me so it hurt, but it was very strongly written nice job and keep writing you're really good xoxo -rachel |
by Yoshi-o
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that poem was one of the best poems i have read its really great its as if i were there actually seeing this in reality, great job, keep up on your talent. |
by Marsha Brown
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Tears or swelling up in my eyes. That was good. Real good. Please keep it up. It's sad to say that things like this really do happen in reality. |
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wow...that gave me chills..but its really distrubing to know that really does happen |
by stephalee
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omg this is soooooooo good u almost got me crying! |
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Sad...very sad |