i think that it was good...keep it up

i think the style was great, u wrote it very well especially if it was your first go, i liked the owrd choice too, keep it up xxxx

Excellent poem. I really enjoy minute poems, and I think you write them well. This is a beautiful poem

I get the just of it but it was kind of hard to understand exactly what it was about. But all in all, it was great! Keep it up! 5/5