Hey this is good...i can understand this...keep ur head up...im alwayz here if ya ever need to talk..keep on writing and take care...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Great poem, enjoyed this one. take care Ann

We all have our moments when we are lost in the world and personally if you are able to find your true place in this crazy world i give you propts. Our feelings, our minds, our every day lives are burdened with so many things we often don't really look at what we are able and capable to do because we are as you stated "Lost in the world" anyways i dont know if that made sense. But anyways. I truely enjoyed the poem you did a great job writing it!
Take care always
Miss.Scooby

Amazingly good poem....so well written, and thank you for commenting on mine, means so much....

Kalika

I like your poem, Suicide is never the solution, my father commited it when I was little, I've grown my life never knowing my father. I read his papers from his military years, I see the pictures he took when he was on tour. Italy is a lovely place, europe is to, He's been around the world they tell me, but this is something I'll never truely know. 5

Hello-

God does want the best in your life-What we do not realize is, life doesn't get all better on it's own. God waits for us to make the first move-When we agree to fight this world, and decide on wanting to truly LIVE-And agree to take God's hand-Then, God will begin to play His role. He will turn you around, take you different paths-open doors, even windows-to show you the bright light of His personal Love for You. All You gotta do-is accept and begin to plan-Ask all the time for God to Guide you. God Bless....and Good Luck!

Love,

Libby

There's always something to hold onto, finding it is just another story. Great poem. >3jess

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Hey please don't be sad,and don't let anything hold u down ! nothing worth it ! Life is tough thats right,but there is much more comin,might be good might be bad,but u just hang in there,learn and watch out !

nice work 5/5

Peace
Rua Francis.

I love your poem it was very transcendent
AwSOMe
~HazE

Really great poem